Spirit of Conviction - Berserk Fan Art

It's too dark to see everything that could give depth. I can tell the main focus of the piece is to give a locked focus on the blended contrast between guts and Griffith but the battlefield was too inked and marks itself as an eyesore. Not that it's one of the focus but it does lock the question what the fuck is all that shit. Ease up on the ink a bit when you shade in to and very the the thick and thinness. The extra thick and bulbous flat tips at the ends of your streaks make it look sloppy